Below I have included highlights from a PowerPoint Presentation on Narrative Writing, I presented to a group of 5th graders. The text reads as if giving instructions to students. Below the article are links to the PowerPoint and a printable handout for students to use in assessing their narrative writing.

Number 1 – Strong Beginning
Your story needs a strong beginning. You can achieve this using one of the following methods:
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Dialogue (Conversation)
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A Question
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A Vivid Description
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An Interesting Fact
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Sound Effects
Number 2 – Paragraphs
Be sure your story has paragraphs. They tell when you’re switching time, place, topic or speaker, and they help break the page up, so it is not just a solid block of writing.
Number 3 – Capitalization & Punctuation
Capitalize
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Beginnings of Sentences
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Proper Nouns
Punctuate
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End Marks (question mark, period, exclamation marks)
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Commas when joining two sentences with a conjunction, addressing a person, with quotations, etc.
Number 4 – Use Rich Words
Remember words such as said, went, and put are DEAD. Use words that describe the action.
Number 5 – Wow Words
Show your reader that you have a high-quality, first-class, superior, excellent, exceptional, outstanding, brilliant, extraordinary, incomparable vocabulary by using 5th grade vocabulary words.
Number 6 – Show, Don’t Tell
The Show, Don’t Tell method of writing is when the writer is able to create a picture in the reader’s mind, to get away from the repetition of such empty words like went, big, or said.
Number 7 – Conversation
The Five Rules for Writing Direct Quotations
#1 Rule |
#2 Rule |
#3 Rule |
#4 Rule |
#5 Rule |
Add quotation marks. |
Separate source phrase from quote. |
Capitalize the first word of the direct quotation. |
Add end marks. |
Add needed capitalization and punctuation. |
Number 8 – Sentences
Be sure to vary your sentences. Some should be short while others are long. Make sure the sentences begin using different parts of speech.
Number 9 – Figurative Language
Use a little figurative language to add interest to your story.
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simile
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metaphor
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alliteration
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personification
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onomatopoeia
Number 10 – Plot Structure
Your story needs to have the following:
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a plot, including setting and characters
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a climax (This is when the plot is solved.)
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an ending
You may download this free PowerPoint Presentation which goes over this information in more detail by clicking on the image below.
2 comments
I love your power point on narrative writing as well as the checklist. With your permission, I’d like to modify some parts for my seventh grade classroom, giving you credit, of course!
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That is fine. Enjoy!